Conversation

im with a friend discussing about stuffs
tas ang biglang banat...

friend: andito ka pa pla?!
g7: hinihintay ko na lang matapos ung dinownload ko.. >:)

friend: buti na lng andyan ka pa.. patulong sana ako sa query
g7: di ko kaya yan..

friend: simple lng ito.. promise madali lng
g7: (yang ganyang banat ang ayaw ko eh) sige patingin na lng
kung may maitutulong ako

friend: (opens laptop) (loading...)

friend: ansaya pala sa palawan
(shows pictures of the place and places she went to)

g7: ganda naman ng lugar!! kailan ung punta mo?
friend: nung january ung first two weeks na wala ako.

g7: kaya pala..

friend: (shows more of the images)
g7: (fascinated about pretty much everything)

(after everything was shown)

(at last, to the point, gusto ko ng umuwi)

friend: ay eto pala ung query, pasenxa tumagal pa na excite lng kasi ako
g7: ok lng (actually hindi >:) ).. ang ganda nga nung lugar
sana ako din hehe..

friend: (gives the details about the prob)
g7: sige test lng ako

(haayyy madali nga lng :((,. 8 na d pa ako nakakauwi,. (pde namang sabihin bukas na lang)
pero tinapos ko parin (andaming reklamo tatapusin din pala) )

(pero habang ginagawa ko)

friend: sorry,. lam ko hindi ka pa kumakain, bili lng ako saglit ng makakain
g7: wag na patapos na ako.. (joke lng,nahiya pa ang ungas :)) ) (pde ung mabubusog ako >:) )

(pagbalik)

friend: kain muna..
g7: yan ok na sya., ganyan ung output, tama?

friend: ang galing naman, salamat ha..
g7: wala nga akong ginawa, tinignan ko lng (pahumble moves)

(pagkatapos kumain)
friend: may tanung lng ako?
g7: anu un?

friend: naisip ko lng, lagi kitang nakikitang tumatawa, mukang masaya
tas ang positive lagi ng tingin mo..(pause) pero "how come your eyes look
cold"

g7: (smiles)
g7: may tissue ka, dumugo ilong ko, english eh.. hehehe


* di ko inaasahan un ah.. :)

Writing Poems (Helpful Hints)

1. Know Your Goal

If you don't know where you're going, how can you
get there? You need to know what you are trying to accomplish before you begin any project. Writing a poem is no exception. Before you begin, ask yourself what you want your poem to "do." Do you want your poem to describe an event in your life, protest a
social injustice, or describe the beauty of nature?
Once your know the goal of your poem, you can conform your writing to that goal. Take each main element in your poem and make it serve the main purpose of the poem.

2. Use Images

"BE A PAINTER IN WORDS," says UWEC English professor emerita, poet, and song writer Peg Lauber. She says poetry should stimulate six senses: sight, hearing, smell, touch, taste and kinesiology (motion).

3. Avoid Clichés

Stephen Minot defines a cliché as: "A metaphor or simile that has become so familiar from overuse that the vehicle....no longer contributes any meaning whatever to the
tenor. It provides neither the vividness of a fresh metaphor nor the strength of a single unmodified word…The word is also used to describe overused but nonmetaphorical expressions such as 'tried and true' and 'each and every" Three Genres: The Writing
of Poetry, Fiction and Drama, 405).

Cliché also describes other overused literary elements. "Familiar plot patterns and stock characters are clichés on a big scale" (Minot 148). Clichés can be overused themes, character types, or plots. For example, the "Lone Ranger" cowboy is a cliché because it has been used so many times that people no longer find it original.

A work full of clichés is like a plate of old food: unappetizing.

Clichés work against original communication. People value creative talent. They want
to see work that rises above the norm. When they see a work without clichés, they
know the writer has worked his or her tail off, doing whatever it takes to be original. When they see a work full to the brim with clichés, they feel that the writer is not show-
ing them anything above the ordinary. (In case you hadn't noticed, this paragraph is chock full of clichés... I'll bet you were bored to tears.)

Clichés dull meaning. Because clichéd writing sounds so familiar, people can comp-
lete finish whole lines without even reading them. If they don't bother to read your
poem, they certainly won't stop to think about it. If they do not stop to think about your poem, they will never encounter the deeper meanings that mark the work of an acco-
mplished poet.

4. Avoid Sentimentality

Sentimentality is "dominated by a blunt appeal to the emotions of pity and love...Popu-
lar subjects are puppies, grandparents, and young lovers" (Minot 416). "When readers have the feeling that emotions like rage or indignation have been pushed artificially for their own sake, they will not take the poem seriously" (132).

Minot says that the problem with sentimentality is that it detracts from the literary quality of your work (416). If your poetry is mushy or teary-eyed, your readers may openly rebel against your effort to invoke emotional response in them. If that happens, they will stop thinking about the issues you want to raise, and will instead spend their energy trying
to control their own gag reflex.

5. Communicate Theme

Poetry always has a theme. Theme is not just a topic, but an idea with an opinion.

Topic: "The Vietnam War"

This is not a theme. It is only a subject. It is just an event. There are no ideas, opinions, or statements about life or of wisdom contained in this sentence.

Theme: "History shows that despite our claims to be peace-loving, unfortunately each person secretly dreams of gaining glory through conflict."

This is a theme. It is not just an event, but a statement about an event. It shows what
the poet thinks about the event. The poet strives to show the reader his/her theme during the entire poem, making use of literary techniques.

*courtesy of http://www.originalpoetry.com/?en=mail
hmmm.. i think i never followed this hints though hehehe..
as long as i could write one, my purpose was to never amuse my readers anyway.. :D

japanese song

to let the time
just pass by
been listening to music
for quite a while

this song is just played
its title is "rainbow"
by the band "round table"
a japanese song

so practically
i cant follow the lyrics
that the artist was saying
through the whole song

but the the melody
is nice
then i found myself
drawn into it

im enjoying it
it feels so relaxing
i guess i dont need to understand it for now
ill just let it touch my heart
for a while longer...

puzzle pieces

a person walked towards me then gave me this puzzle
he just handed it to me end left
not knowing what to do with it
i just left it untouched
day by day i'm just looking at it
i started to feel curious
so one day i felt like looking at it
i cant seem to understand it
ofcourse at first you'll never do
so everyday i'm looking at all the pieces it has
every piece is totally different from the others
each has a different image
and each has a complex structure
then the next thing i realized
is that some of the image
are connected to one another
and they could be connected to one another
even with the structure they have
what could this mean?
was their any reason behind it?
even with a lot of questions in mind
i got excited over it
it started to seem amusing somehow
and slowly i got a little excited over it
day by day i seem to put together small parts of it
and i kinda feel happy with that
but this feeling is slowly fading
i cant seem to complete the whole
it started to irritate me already
with this frustration
i could really give up on it
but still i started it
i need to finish it
ill just have to tell myself
that their is still a lot to do
and slowly get the thing done in no time
due to my curiosity
i still struggle to complete it
when will i complete it?
what could be the picture drawn?
guess i need to try harder
to see the image behind
for nothing really compares
when you achieve what you like the most

Howl of the Dark

being chased by the shadows
deeper i go
to the place
where i shouldn't be

one by one
they've started to disappear
little by little
everything started to fade

with this rotten scent
trembling in fear
nothing but agony
in this tormented place

theirs no one left but me
i lost all the sanity i have left
walking aimlessly to nowhere
i'm consumed in darkness

finally all lights fade
totally clouded with evil thoughts
in this dark abyss
engulfed by despair
His death only awaits

Voice of Darkness

when light faded into darkness.. what flower of evil bloomed then, in that abyss?!

Seasons

the sun is brightly shining
under the clear blue sky
even with this heat
still, everyones enjoying

went to the beach
to enjoy myself
having all this stuff
got ready to swim

played and had fun
with this burst of enjoyment
the day passed by so fast
nearly at its end

watching the sun set
with this wonderful scenery
time really do pass by
when youre enjoying

after watching the sunset
prepared for the events this evening
fireworks display
under the starry night

this feeling of satisfaction
this kind of relief
this happiness
i hope this moments will never end

went to the park
to have a walk
then sat on a bench
and had a rest

looked at the sakura tree
its leaves are gradually falling
with that happening
the tree started to look depressing

things happen with a reason
but even so
it feels lonely
when things you appreciate fades

day by day
its getting more dull
i guess its beauty
cannot remain forever

it truly is sad
without its beauty
but then ill wait
until it blossoms once more

the wind is changing
its gradually getting cold
as i look at the sky
i couldnt see the sun anywhere

and as i walk the street
i just came to realize
as it touched my skin
that snow is already falling

their are no one around
just me along the street
the snow is piling up
it slowly covers everything

now trapped at home
looking outside through the window
its getting stronger
a blizzard is coming

even though im secure
i dont like this anymore
when will this end
it still feels cold

opening my eyes
and tried to get out of bed
by the looks of it
everything is already calm

the snow is melting
i hear the drops of water
the snow covered surrounding
is now as it was before

i havent been out in a while
instead of being trapped at home
i could finally go out
to do the things i used to

sitting under a tree
at the hilltop
looking at the scenery
i finally realize

everthing's starting a new
everything is in place
now once again
a bud blossoms once more